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Shepard Saved by SinRedemption

The only issue I see with this is the posing of Shepard. Shepard looks like she is, standing?, in Garrus' arms. She appears far too rid...

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Shepard Saved by SinRedemption
The only issue I see with this is the posing of Shepard. Shepard looks like she is, standing?, in Garrus' arms. She appears far too ridged for her condition and position. It appears she is severely injured, and should be more of a rag doll at that point.
Some suggestions:
*Shepard needs to be slumping in his arms, legs dangling freely, her body more folding at the waist.
*Depending on if she is supposed to be conscious, you might want to rest her head on his shoulder, or hanging back.
*Depending on if she is supposed to be conscious, you might want to dangle her right arm or have her holding Garrus higher around his upper armor with both hands locked.

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:iconmoreeman06:
moreeman06 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Happy Birthday :)
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Sunnie2 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Not for a couple weeks still, but thank you all the same! =D
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moreeman06 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem:)
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