The only issue I see with this is the posing of Shepard. Shepard looks like she is, standing?, in Garrus' arms. She appears far too ridged for her condition and position. It appears she is severely injured, and should be more of a rag doll at that point.
*Shepard needs to be slumping in his arms, legs dangling freely, her body more folding at the waist.
*Depending on if she is supposed to be conscious, you might want to rest her head on his shoulder, or hanging back.
*Depending on if she is supposed to be conscious, you might want to dangle her right arm or have her holding Garrus higher around his upper armor with both hands locked.